Archibald Knee and Dorothy Beard

Extract from
Coroner’s Inquisition
Stroud News

Archibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard

Published 8th September 1916

2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths of Archibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard
Double Tragedy
Near Stroud
—————–
SOLDIER AND HIS FIANCE DROWNED
—————–
INQUEST AND VERDICT
The mysterious disappearance of Archibald Clutterbuck Knee, aged 25 years of the Gloucesters, and whose home is at West End, Minchinhampton and also of his young lady friend Dorothy Beard, aged 18 years of Burleigh, Brimscombe, was cleared up on Friday just afternoon, when the bodies were found in the Iron Gates Pond, Longfords Lake. The two young people had been missing since the previous Sunday evening when Knee left to take the girl home and nothing more was heard of them until Friday when their bodies were found tied together as stated.The enquiry into the circumstances surrounding their deaths was held by Mr A. J. Morton Ball (divisional coroner) at the Weighbridge Inn, Longfords early on Saturday morning. Mr J. Benjamin was appointed fore man of the jury.Nathaniel Beard, a millhand of Gravel Hill, Burleigh, father of the deceased girl, gave evidence of identification and said she was a cloth weaver at Messrs P. C. Evans and Sons Ltd, Brimscombe. She was a strong and active girl. She had been keeping company with Knee for the past five years and on Sunday morning August 27th she left home at 10.30 stating that she should not be home to dinner. Knee was home on sick leave but witness had not seen him as he was not in the habit of coming to the house. His daughter did not come home at night and at about 12.30 on Monday morning Knee’s parents came to the house and said their son had not come home and that he told them he should be home at about 10.30. They both left the house about 9.45, it being understood that his daughter was returning home. A car had been ordered to take Knee to the Great Western Railway station as he was due to return to camp from leave. His daughter had not been depressed at all and he had to fear that any such thing as this would happen.Charles Henry Knee, a clothworker and father of the deceased soldier who was, before joining the Army on June 14th 1916, also a clothworker, said his son came home on sick leave on August 22nd and was due to return on August 27th. During the time he had been at home he told witness distinctly that he would rather die than go back, and this he said more than once. From a child he has suffered from nervous depression. Witness did his best to cheer his son up, and he was under the full impression that he would return to camp on Sunday. On that day Dorothy Beard, to whom he was engaged, came to the house and remained there practically the whole day, and she seemed somewhat depressed at, he thought, his son having to go back. Witness last saw the couple at about 9.45 when they left for the girl to go home and as they were going out his son said “Father I shan’t be long. I shall be back about half-past ten”. He thought he was going to take her home, a mile away. He had not returned at 11.30 and, becoming alarmed, he went to Mr Beard’s house and found that the girl had not returned. He saw P.C. Dance and reported their disappearance and sat up the whole night, and next morning, with the girl’s father made search on the Common in the pools and reservoirs but without result. He heard of he recovery of the bodies on Friday afternoon. They had not had the slightest quarrel, being most devoted to each other.Alfred Davis, a millhand of High Street, Minchinhampton, said he heard the young couple were missing and about 1.20 on Friday he walked along the footpath, a private one by the Iron Mills Pond to see if he could discover any sign of them. Beneath a tree he saw a girl’s hat and a soldier’s hat and also a bundle in the water but he could not make out what it was. Thinking however it might be the deceased he went to Nailsworth Police Station. The grass
Extract from Coroner’s Inquisition
Stroud News
held on the
Archibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy BeardPublished 8th September 1916Page 6 Columns 4 & 5
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was knocked down considerably. The police
came at 3 o’clock and until then nothing more
was done in the matter.P.C. Hitchings said searching enquiry
had been made to discover the whereabouts of
the young couple but no-one had before looked
into the pond where they were found and no
dragging operations had been carried out. On
Friday he had a telephone message to come to
the Iron Gates Pond where he saw Mr A. T.
Playne, and with ropes and a grappling iron he
brought the bodies to the bank. They were
tied together with the man’s raincoat, the knot
which was behind the girl, being made with the
tails of his coat. They were face to face and the
knot must have been tied by the man. There
were no marks on either of the bodies, with the
exception of an abrasion on the girl’s face which
he thought was caused by the drags. With as-
sistance he brought them to the Weighbridge
Inn and made examination but found no letters.
The military pass and railway ticket were found
on Knee, as well as a purse containing 11s. On
the girl was a wristlet watch which had stopped
at 11 minutes to 4, a gold bangle, necklet and
brooch. They were both fully dressed. Where
they were found the water was at least four feet
deep.Elizabeth Butler, wife of Wm Butler, en-
gine driver at Longfords Mills, who laid the
bodies out, also gave evidence.The jury returned a verdict in each case to
the effect that they committed suicide by
drowning themselves, there being no evidence
to show the state of their minds.Mr A. T. Playne, at the end of the enquiry
said, as the owner of the pond in which unfor-
tunate young couple drowned themselves, he
should like to express his great sympathy with
the relatives. He was very sorry indeed it
should have happened on his property and he
sincerely hoped the parents would be com-
forted in their bereavement. The Coroner said
he was sure all wish to express sympathy with
the families in their very grievous and terrible
losses, and the jury agreed with these senti-
ments.THE FUNERALSThe deceased girl, Dorothy Beard, was
buried at Amberley Churchyard on Tuesday
afternoon subsequent to that of Knee, who was
interred at Minchinhampton Baptist graveyard.
There was a large attendance of sorrowing rela-
tives and friends at both interments. At Pte.
Knee’s funeral the Rev. S.J. Ford (pastor) offici-
ated. Deceased had been a member of the Bap-
tist Sunday School and before his death had at-
tended the Sunday evening service at the Bap-
tist Chapel, at which the Pastor made special
reference to the young soldier who was about to
return (as was then thought) to his military du-
ties. It transpired, however, that he was by no
means enamoured with the prospects of his re-
turn to military life. At the funeral his parents
were both present, as well as Mr. and Mrs.
Pegler (uncle and aunt), Mr. and Mrs. Pates
(cousins), two uncles, Messrs. Beard (two broth-
ers of the deceased girl) and others. There was
a large number of floral emblems of sympathy
which were inscribed as follows :- In loving
memory of our darling boy from his broken-
hearted Mam and Dad ; in loving memory from
his Aunt Stephens ; in loving sympathy from
Uncle Will and Aunt Jenny ; with loving sym-
pathy from cousin Maud and Fred ; with deep-
est respect from his workmates, F. Kirby and C.
Seville ; with deepest sympathy from Mr. and
Mrs. F. Burford and family ; in kind remem-
brance and with deepest sympathy from W. and
F. Gardner, Edna and Wilfred.————————————————————–Transcribed by Steve Pitman from the original (on microfiche)
held in Stroud Library, in the Stroud News, 8th September 1916,
page 6, cols 4 and 5
Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard
Transcript of
Coroner’s Verdicts,
Police Reports
And
Witness Statements
Transcribed by Steve Pitman
from the original Coroner’s Documents
held at Gloucestershire Archives, Gloucester
Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard
VERDICT:
On view of the body of Archibald Clutterbuck Knee the jurors upon their oath say
that the said Archibald Clutterbuck Knee aged 25 years of West End Minchin-
hampton formerly a cloth maker and recently a private in the 15th Battalion
Gloucestershire Regiment—home on sick leave was last seen alive with Dorothy
Beard on the evening of 27th August and was found drowned in the Iron Mills
pond on the 1st day of September having committed suicide by drowning himself
with Dorothy Beard (both tied together in the mans waterproof with the tying knot
behind the girls back. No marks of injury or signs of violence (mutual consent).Witnesses – 1/ Charles Henry Knee (father) 2/ Nathaniel Beard (father)
3/ Alfred Davies 4/ Police Constable Edgar G Hitchings 5/ Elizabeth Butler[Signed] – A J Morton – HM Coroner of Gloucestershire
John Benjamin – Foreman of the Juryand 11 Jurors (2 signed with their mark and seal X)————————
VERDICT:
On view of the body of Dorothy Beard the jurors upon their oath say that the said
Dorothy Beard aged 18 years (daughter of Nathaniel Beard of Gravel Hill Burleigh
Minchinhampton) cloth weaver having been last seen alive with Archibald Clutter-
buck Knee at Minchinhampton on the evening of Sunday 27th August was found
drowned with him (tied together in his macintosh coat on the 1st September in the
Iron Mills pond parish of Avening having as the jury believe committed suicide by
drowning herself (mutual consent) no marks of injury or violence except a slight
abrasion on her face.Witnesses – 1/ Charles Henry Knee (father) 2/ Nathaniel Beard (father)
3/ Alfred Davies 4/ Police Constable Edgar G Hitchings 5/ Elizabeth Butler[Signed] – A J Morton – HM Coroner of Gloucestershire
John Benjamin – Foreman of the Juryand 11 Jurors (2 signed with their mark and seal X)
Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy BeardNOTICE TO CORONER GIVING INFORMATION OF A DEATH
page5image4360

 

(Police Report)

 

  1. 1  Date of death or discovery of the body
  2. 2  Name
  3. 3  Age
  4. 4  Residence
  5. 5  Occupation
  6. 6  Names of any persons present at the death
  7. 7  Where it occurred
  8. 8  In what parish
  9. 9  If found dead

1st September 1916

Archibald Clutterbuck Knee

25 Years
West End, Minchinhampton
Soldier

Fishery Stream, Longfords
Avening
Yes
9.45 pm, 27th August, 16, at his home
His father (Charles Henry Knee)
No


No
No


Respectable

Single
Suffocation by drowning
None
Tuesday 5th Inst 3.pm

 

  1. 10  When and where was the deceased last seen alive
  2. 11  By whom
  3. 12  Was the life of the deceased insured ; if so in what Office
  4. 13  Who would benefit
  5. 14  In case of children, were they at home or at nurse, legitimate or ille-
    gitimate
  6. 15  In case of infants, who attended the mother during her confinement
  7. 16  Was the deceased ill for any, and what length of time before death
  8. 17  Was the deceased attended by any Medical Practitioner
  9. 18  Is give full name and address
  10. 19  When was the last occasion deceased was so attended
  11. 20  What was deceased then suffering from
  12. 21  What were the habits of life and character of deceased, and of those
    with whom he or she resided
  13. 22  Was deceased single, married or cohabiting without marriage
  14. 23  What was the known or supposed cause of death
  15. 24  Were there any suspicious circumstances surrounding the death

(25) When do the relatives wish to bury the deceased (Day, Date & Time)

 

REMARKS
I respectfully beg to report for the information of the Coroner that the deceased was a private soldier, No.
29386, in the 15th Battalion of the Gloucestershire Regiment, stationed at Chiseldon. He was home on sick
leave and should have rejoined his battalion at 9.30pm on August 27th 16. He kept company with Dorothy
Beard and was very fond of her. On Sunday 27th of August, about 9.45pm the deceased in company with
Dorothy Beard left his home at Minchinhampton, telling his father that they would be back by 10.30pm, as
he intended to catch the Mail Train from Stroud to Swindon. He did not return. About 11.30pm his father
became anxious about him, as deceased had said “that he would rather die than rejoin his regiment, my
poor nerves wont stand it”.
His father gave information to the police at Minchinhampton and information was circulated and a search
made, to no effect until 1st September when a man named Alfred Davies in the employ of W. Playne &
Coy, Longford Mills happened to be walking by the Fishery Stream, when he noticed a soldier’s cap, a
womans hat, & umbrella on the bank and on looking in the water saw two bodies.
Information was given to the police who had them removed to the Weighbridge Inn, Nailsworth.

  1. 25  Should the Coroner deem an Inquest necessary, it can be held at Weighbridge Inn, where the body now lies.
  2. 26  Witnesses’ Names are : 1] Charles Henry Knee (Father) 4] Alfred Davies 5] Elizabeth Butler
  3. 27  Signature with Rank & Station of Police Officer filling up & transmit- William Loveday. Rank 1st C C , Avening
    ting this paper

 

28 Date and mode of transmitting paper
[signed] A. J Morton Ball Esq., Coroner
2nd September 16, direct to Coroner

 

5
Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy BeardNOTICE TO CORONER GIVING INFORMATION OF A DEATH
page6image4216

 

(Police Report)

 

  1. 1  Date of death or discovery of the body
  2. 2  Name
  3. 3  Age
  4. 4  Residence
  5. 5  Occupation
  6. 6  Names of any persons present at the death
  7. 7  Where it occurred
  8. 8  In what parish
  9. 9  If found dead

1st September 1916

Dorothy Beard

18 Years
Gravel Hill, Burleigh, Minchinhampton
Weaver

Fishery Stream, Longfords
A vening
Yes
9.45 pm, 27th August, 16, in Minchinhampton
Charles Henry Knee
Yes. Prudential Assurance Ltd
Her parents


No
No


Respectable

Single
Suffocation by drowning
None
Tuesday 5th Inst 3.pm

 

  1. 10  When and where was the deceased last seen alive
  2. 11  By whom
  3. 12  Was the life of the deceased insured ; if so in what Office
  4. 13  Who would benefit
  5. 14  In case of children, were they at home or at nurse, legitimate or ille-
    gitimate
  6. 15  In case of infants, who attended the mother during her confinement
  7. 16  Was the deceased ill for any, and what length of time before death
  8. 17  Was the deceased attended by any Medical Practitioner
  9. 18  Is give full name and address
  10. 19  When was the last occasion deceased was so attended
  11. 20  What was deceased then suffering from
  12. 21  What were the habits of life and character of deceased, and of those
    with whom he or she resided
  13. 22  Was deceased single, married or cohabiting without marriage
  14. 23  What was the known or supposed cause of death
  15. 24  Were there any suspicious circumstances surrounding the death
  16. 25  When do the relatives wish to bury the deceased (Day, Date & Time)

 

REMARKS
I respectfully beg to report for the information of the Coroner that the deceased left her home about
10.30am on Sunday the 27th of August, in her usual good health, and told her parents that she would not
be home for dinner. She proceeded to the house of Mr Charles Henry Knee, West End, Minchinhampton,
and spent the day there, as she was engaged to a Archibald Clutterbuck Knee, son of the latter, who was a
soldier in the 15th Gloucestershire Battalion, and was home on leave. About 9.45pm the deceased and her
lover left his home in M.Hampton, and was not seen again until she was found drowned near the Iron
Mills in the parish of Avening.

  1. 26  Should the Coroner deem an Inquest necessary, it can be held at Weighbridge Inn, where the body now lies.
  2. 27  Witnesses’ Names are : 1] Nathaniel Beard (Father) 2] Charles H Knee 3] Alfred Davies 4] Elizabeth Butler
  1. 28  Signature with Rank & Station of Police Officer filling up & transmit-
    ting this paper
  2. 29  Date and mode of transmitting paper
    [signed] A. J Morton Ball Esq., Coroner
William Loveday. Rank 1st Class Constable ,
Avening2nd September 16, direct to Coroner

 

Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard
GLOUCESTERSHIRE TO WIT – Informations of WITNESSES severally taken and acknowl-
edged on behalf of our Sovereign Lord the King touching the death of Archibald Clut-
terbuck Knee at the Parish of Avening in the said county, on the second day of Septemberin the year of our Lord One Thousand Nine Hundred and sixteen. Before me, ALFRED
JOHN MORTON BALL, one of His Majesty’s Coroners for the said County, on an Inquisi-
tion then and there taken on view of the body of the said Archibald Clutterbuck Knee
then and there lying dead.Charles Henry Knee on his oath saith I live at West End Minchinhampton and am a
cloth worker my son Archibald Clutterbuck Knee was 25 last birthday a single man
cloth worker and recently a private 15th Battalion Gloucester Regiment. He joined
on 14th June 1916. He came home on the 22nd. He had recovered from German
Measles and was due to return on the 27th. He told me he would rather die than go
back – from a child he has suffered at times from nervous depression. He enlisted
voluntarily. I did my best to cheer him — and thought he would … … his duty on
the 27th. Dorothy Beard stayed there most of that day they were engaged to be
married the engagement ring is produced found on her – she was depressed. I had
ordered the car without his knowledge that there should be no mistake about his re-
turn. About 9.45 they left the house together he said he would be back by 10.30 –
he left to take her home about a mile away – I was uneasy at 11.30 I meant to see
him off – the car came I saw P.C. Dance I spoke to him and we rode to Tom Longs
Post and went on to Beards house found she had not returned I sat up all night and
at daybreak we for Beard and I sounded nervous & pools and told the police, the
….. Told us about 4.30. I have seen and identified both bodies – I have no suspicion
of any other person – they were devoted to each other -[signed – in a shaky hand] C H Knee
————Continues with statement by Alfred Davis on separate sheet as overleaf ….
Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard
Alfred Davies on his oath saith I live at High Street Minchinhampton a mill hand I
did not know either of the deceased but knew they were missing and walked along
the private path to see if I could find them. I saw a womans hat and a soldiers hat
and an umbrella on the bank of the Iron Mills pond Avening. I saw a bundle in the
water underneath – I went to Nailsworth for the police I returned alone and Mr
Playne met me there the grass was laid low there – the police came about 3pm I
had went there about 1.40 -[signed] Alfred Davis——————Edgar George Hitchings on his oath I am a police constable at Minchinhampton I
knew of the disappearance and had had search made at Longfords and other
places – No one had been down at the pools and no dragging had been done – We
had no ….. to guide us – About 2.30pm Sept 1st I knew of a telephone message
from Nailsworth and came down to Iron Mills at once Mr Playne I noticed the
womans hat was …. – Mr Playne had … them and we brought the bodies to the
bank – they were tied together face to face very tight in the mans waterproof coat –
tied in a knot by the tails of the coat at the back of the womans waist – there was
no mark about either body except the slight abrasion on the womans face the arms
close and the hands limp – I brought them with help out of the water … a purse
with 11/6 in silver – a military pass and return ticket to Chiseldon – no papers –
On the watch bracelet stopped at 3.50 a gold bangle neckchain and locket brooch
and engagement ring – fully dressed the man in uniform – There is about 4 feet of
water. The water was ……[Signed] Edgar George Hitchings
—————–Elizabeth Butler on her oath saith I am wife of William Butler an engine driver at
Longfords. I did not know deceased persons but was asked to lay the bodies out
there are no marks about the mans body – as to the woman – there is a bruise on
the side of the face and about the mouth.[ signed ] Elizabeth Butler
Coroner’s Inquisition
held on the 2nd September 1916 at The Weighbridge Inn
into the deaths ofArchibald Clutterbuck Knee and Dorothy Beard
GLOUCESTERSHIRE TO WIT – Informations of WITNESSES severally taken and acknowl-
edged on behalf of our Sovereign Lord the King touching the death of Dorothy Beard at
the Parish of Avening in the said county, on the second day of September in the year of our
Lord One Thousand Nine Hundred and sixteen. Before me, ALFRED JOHN MORTON
BALL, one of His Majesty’s Coroners for the said County, on an Inquisition then and there
taken on view of the body of the said Dorothy Beard then and there lying dead.Nathaniel Beard on his oath saith I live at Gravel Hill Burleigh Minchinhampton
mill hand my daughter Dorothy Beard was 18 years old last birthday a cloth weaver
at Brimscombe Mills – Her life was […] for my wifes benefit not long [ ….]. She
was strong and active and kept company with Archibald Clutterbuck Knee for 3
years past. She left home at 10.30 [….] 27th August and said she would not be home
for dinner All was right at home. I knew Knee was home on sick leave but had not
seen him he did not come to my house. As she did not come home I went to Mr
Knees about 12.30 a.m. on 28th They came and told me the son was not returned.
They told me the two had left the house together about 1/4 before 10 – They had a
car waiting to take him to Stroud station but he did not come There has been no
sign of upset in my daughters mind – I had no fear of anything of this kind.
The mark
X
Of Nathaniel BeardThe above depositions were
duly taken and acknowledged
at the parish of Avening
aforesaid this 2nd September
1916 Before me[signed] A J Morton Ball
HM Coroner
See also
depositions
on A C Knee

Jack Russell and Edward Hogg

Immaculate in spotless cricket whites,

Keeping wicket on the village green,


Up past Slad’s crossroad war memorial,


Betwixt Purgatory and Paradise,


To where 7323 Private Edward Hogg’s name


(7th Battalion, Gloucestershire Regiment),


Returned, after dying with 300 comrades,


In their own version of hell in Belgium.


One hundred years later, great-great nephew,


Jack Russell: of England, Gloucestershire, Stroud,


Archway School, Forest Green, and pilgrim,


Recreated the morning steps to death 


In the fields around Zwartelen in Belgium:


‘I found a photo of him about five years ago …


Last year … we found the very field where he died …


Waiting for the right time and then at 9 a.m.,


When they were ordered into the woods,


I walked down the road to the spot …


They lay out there all day, suffering.


Some of them made it back under cover of darkness …


I felt like I knew him and this was the closest I could get to him …


I don’t paint blood and gore …


It’s the moment before all hell breaks loose.


Because I’d found a photograph of Edward,


I could paint him looking back one last time’ …


Looking back to Slad, before stepping out to Hell.

With thanks to Sally Bailey, Stroud News. Private Edward Hogg is also commemorated on the Roll of Honour in the parish church at Slad, as well as on the war memorial. Purgatory is a copse above Slad. Paradise is near Painswick. The only place in the UK where these names appear some 6 miles apart.

The Deserter in Cider with Rosie: Questions

Radical Stroud - Stuart Butler - Slad

A Retrospective on ‘British Army Mutineers, 1914 – 1922’, by Julian Putkowski

At first glance, it must seem obvious
That as there was no explosion of mutiny
Until after the conclusion of conflict,
Then the British Army must have been,
On the whole, loyal to King and Country
(Over half of the army were volunteers);
Admittedly, two hundred and sixty six men
Were shot for desertion in the face of the enemy,
But these were acts of individual insubordination,
Rather than acts of collective, mutinous solidarity,
And few executions resulted at the Great War’s end,
(Nothing like the musket balls in Burford Church,
After the Leveller’s Mutiny in 1649,
Nor the 1797 mutinies at the Nore and Spithead,
When 29 members of ‘the floating republic’ were hanged),
But on the other hand…
The necessities of trench line duty
Prevented the mass meetings necessary for mutiny,
As opposed to acts of individual insubordination,
But when troops did get the chance to meet en masse …
Then sometimes all hell let loose,
So, who, where, when, what, why and how?
Over 2,000 men were charged with mutiny
Between 1914 and 1922
(Only men and other ranks, no officers;
A staggering 90% found guilty),
And there were over 300,000 courts martial cases,
With, again, a similar figure of 90% found guilty:
Officers demanded absolute discipline,
While diffident Tommies were often alone in these courts,
Facing a vehement prosecution …
There were over fifty wartime mutinies at home,
The major ones being at Canterbury,
In July 1915 and January 1917,
Towcester, November 1916,
And Bramshott, November 1917;
There were also 5, 739 conscientious objectors
Who faced charges,
As well as the formation, in June 1917,
Of a workers’ and soldiers’ council
At, of all places, Tonbridge Wells:
Ringleaders were posted to France and elsewhere,
But government spies and agents provocateurs
Could not prevent the ubiquitous unrest in 1919,
When army camps were overwhelmed
By strikes, demonstrations and protest
At the slow pace of demobilization;
Special Branch top toff, Sir Basil Thomson, gloomily intoned
‘I do not think at any time in history since the Bristol Riots
have we been so near revolution’,
So worried was he by the flying of red flags …
But, in the main, motivations for mutiny
Were about dreadful training camps and rations
(Wiltshire, 1914 and 1915, Etaples, 1917),
War weary impatience with demobilization
(Dover, Folkestone, Calais and India, 1919),
Complaints about mistreatment and punishment
(Blargies North Prison, 1916),
But even when taking that into account,
The 1919 mutiny at Poona is an exemplar,
Of how an ostensible protest about demobilization
Was, in fact, a pregnant denotation
About the fragility of Empire,
And its impact upon boss and worker at home:
Soldiers in India were worried about their jobs,
If not speedily repatriated;
The top brass in India were worried that after Amritsar,
There might be insufficient troops to quell rebellion –
But fighting for King, Country and Empire
Would be cold comfort if you lost your job,
A few ‘Homes fit for Heroes’ were not enough,
Strikes, wage cuts and unemployment
Were just around the corner in ‘Dear Old Blighty’,
And as for Ireland and Empire …
And as for war against the Bolsheviks …

He is a tantalising figure, that deserter.

David Adams in his recent book about F.W. Harvey, The Nightmare Trail, writes of direct disobedient action by soldiers in 1919: ‘Indeed, such was the discontent among returning soldiers that in January 1919 700 men of the Third Battalion Gloucestershire Regiment refused to parade, drill, train or work, and marched and demonstrated about work, pay and food conditions – part of a nationwide series of strikes and mutinies hidden by the government from the public.’

Question: Was the deserter one of these? He could not have been one of the three men of the Glosters who mutinied at Malvern Wells in 1915 – could he?

The Sainsbury’s Advertisment

It’s a bit Herbert Marcuse,
A bit One Dimensional Man:
A unification of opposites,
A harmonisation of contradictions,
Where liberal-democratic capitalism
Gives that tantalising illusion of freedom,
Whilst simultaneously appropriating opposition.
It’s Gramsci’s cultural hegemony,
It’s Sainsbury’s Christmas advertisement:
A celebration of an unofficial truce,
With unauthorised fraternisation,
And near mutiny,
Held up as a paragon of virtue,
In a sanitised World War One
(Where is that queer, sardonic rat?),
With the fetishisation of confection and money,
And where disobedience and mutinous self-expression
Have been gently press ganged into the national service
Of conformism, consumerism, capitalism and consumption.
Not so much 1914 – 2014, as 1984:
Orwellian double-speak,
Post-modernist history,
21st century store wars.

The 1914 Truce in Context

The 1914 Truce in Context

It wasn’t, in fact, a bolt from the blue,
Instead the 1914 Truce was part of a pattern,
That both preceded that Christmas and continued beyond:
There were ‘cushy’ sectors, involving ‘laissez-faire’,
‘Rest and let rest’, ‘Let sleeping dogs lie’,
‘Mutual obligation element’,
‘Tacit truces’, ‘mutual understanding’,
‘Compromise, and be mighty glad to be alive’,
Running along the British front line on the Western Front.

There were respected rituals during the day:
Breakfast bacon and ration party truces,
When as Ian Hay wrote in 1915:
‘It would be child’s play to shell …ration wagons
and water carts…but on the whole there is silence…
if you prevent your enemy from drawing his rations…
he will prevent you from drawing yours.’

In addition, both sides faced General Winter:
A German officer commented in 1914:
‘Friend and foe alike go to fetch straw from the same rick
to protect them from the cold and rain and to have some sort of bedding
to lie on – and never a shot is fired.’

Sometimes, defused rifle grenades were tossed into trenches,
Containing messages, sometimes weather truces
Led to salutations, conversations and jokes,
(‘”Waiter!”… fifty Fritzes stuck their heads up…”Coming Sir.” ’);
Sometimes, a deliberate policy of positive inertia
Was recognized and reciprocated,
Sometimes night patrols would studiously avoid each other.

Weaponry, even when used, could also send messages:
Rifle and machine gun fire might be aimed too high,
Hand bombing led to a signaled, invitational
And deliberate misplacing of explosives:
‘their trenches…no more than ten or fifteen yards from ours…
was a good insurance against strafing on either side.
The mildest exchange of hand grenades or bombs…
Would have made life intolerable.’

Heavy artillery took a different line:
Here messages were sent by the fact that often,
The same spot would be shelled at exactly the same time each day:
‘Twelve little Willies at noon to the tick,
Got our heads down, and go them down quick,
Peaceful and calm was the rest of the day,
Nobody hurt and nothing to say.’

‘Nobody hurt and nothing to say’:
I have compiled this prose-poem from ‘Trench Warfare 1914-1918: The Live and Let Live System’, by Tony Ashworth (Macmillan, 1980); his conclusion is that:
‘Altogether it does not seem unreasonable to assert that live and let live occurred in about one-third of all trench tours made by all divisions within the BEF. Such was the scale of this undertone of trench warfare.’
This ignored and forgotten history is something to talk about in centenary year.

Live and Let Live

When you’ve been out ‘ere as long as I ‘ave,
You get to know the ropes and have a laugh,
Keep’ yer ‘ead down aint enough for Fritz,
You’ve got to show you can live and let live.
When Fritz has his breakfast, let ‘im be,
Then he’ll let you ‘ave your bacon an’ yer tea,
But if you shells ‘im when ‘e’s having grub,
He’ll pay ya double back and there’s the rub,
An’ when yer out at night lookin’ for straw,
If you sees Fritz then give ‘im some, and more,
Then he’ll do the same and ease yer bed,
Instead of aimin’ for yer ‘ead.
An’ when it rains and raids is off,
Send Fritz a joke and make ‘im laugh,
And when he fires and aims too high,
You shoot ‘im back but in the sky.
Live and let live, that’s our way,
That way we live another day.
“Eh? What’s that? My best memory?
Of this whole long ruddy war?
It aint the medals. It aint the glory.
It was No Man’s Land. That first Christmas.
In the snow. Playing Fritz at football.”

Stroud 1914

Stroud 1914

Stroud, like so many places a century ago,

Was an unconscious microcosm of the whole nation:

The sloping slate roofs of the red-bricked terraces,

The new suburban villas with their monkey puzzle trees,

The grand country houses with their uninterrupted views,

The old stone cottages with their vegetable plots,

The farms, the barns, the byres, the stables, the milk churns,

The dry stone lanes, the holloways, the footpaths,

The ginnels, the alley-ways, the new name streets,

The orcha​rds, the commons, the hedgerows, the fields,

The rivers, the streams, the springs, the brooks,

The canals, the wharves, the railway lines, the gas lights,

The bridges, the viaducts, the factories, the mills,

The forge, the furnace, the foundry, the smithy,

The plumes of steam as men marched to the station:

The clunk of the signal, the guard’s shrill whistle,

The handkerchiefs, the tears, the waves, the loneliness,

The camps, the tents, the ships, the ‘planes, the fronts,

The telegrams, the slow drawing down of the blinds.

A Guide to the War Memorials of Stroud and the Five Valleys

My pilgrimage started in those dirty days of late winter,
When the wretched rain fell incessantly,
It was just as damp as ‘Bleak House’:
It dripped through the branches in Rodborough Churchyard,
It dripped through the branches of the yew trees
In St Lawrence’s in Stroud,
And slid down the ‘No Drinking in the Street’ sign
Outside the Park in the Slad Road.

But puddles reflected sunlight gleams the next day,
As I pedalled through snowdrops and birdsong,
To the two war memorials in Woodchester;
And a week later, February crocuses bloomed
In the fields beyond Fretherne Churchyard,
While storm clouds from the Somme
Gathered over the Severn,
Just where Ivor Gurney plied his boat.

Next on the list was a bus trip to Stroud Hospital,
To take a picture of the 1919 Peace Wing,
On a hailstorm-sunshine-rainbow sort of day,
Before taking the railway to Stonehouse,
And a warm March day walk to Lower Mills,
Where I caught the number 14 bus to Stroud,
Whose delightful driver, Steve Burrows,
Allowed me to alight at Leonard Stanley,
Kings Stanley and then Selsley,
To take quick memorial photographs,
Much to the delight of my fellow passengers,
On a Magical Mystery Tour sort of trip:
‘Tell that man he’s left his bag.’
‘Don’t worry’ he’s getting back on again.’

Sunday March the 9th was a gleaming spring day,
So I bicycled past umpteen old cloth mills,
River liquid light all along my way,
To Nailsworth, Avening, Minchinhampton and Amberley,
With long barrows and a standing stone for company;
How lucky we are to live where we live!
I sang all the way home:
‘Why, oh why, oh why, oh why, would you rather be anywhere else?’

I biked around Cainscross on the following Friday,
Taking in St Matthews Church
(My grandparents were married here on August 22nd 1914,
Before Gramp went off to join up)
And Victory Park,
Then into a blossom blown cut grass wind,
As I went past the locks and sluice gates of the canal,
To Eastington’s churchyard memorial and village hall,
Then Frocester’s memorial at the cross roads,
Before photographing war graves in St Swithins,
July 1918, 1919 and 1920,
Deaths just before and then after the Armistice:
Glimpse the pity of war at Leonard Stanley.

An equinoctial bike ride took me to BrImscombe,
Whose memorial is tucked in by the busy A419,
And then along the primrose path to the old signal box,
Down at St Mary’s, Chalford,
One of the few staffed level crossings left:
‘You must have the best job in the country.’
‘Thank – you. I think so too.
Time has been kinder here than in most places.’
I then photographed the Chalford crucifix memorial,
A traditional mythopoeic setting at a crossroads,

But on returning to Stroud, storm clouds gathered,
So I caught an afternoon number 93 to Whiteshill,
Where the scaffolded memorial stands at a crossroads,
Just up from the churchyard,
Where two gravestones caught my eye:
205519 Gunner A. Perry, Royal Field Artillery,
18th February 1917, Ubique Quo Fas et Gloria Ducunt
(Where Right and Glory Lead),
And
In Loving Memory of Alfred,
Beloved Husband of Ada Louisa Berry,
Who died February 18th 1917 aged 32 years,
Peace Perfect Peace.
This juxtaposition of state and family, love and duty,
Haunted me as I descended by an old track
To Salmon Springs and thence into town,
With Wilfred Owen’s line following me in the wind:
‘We only know war lasts, rain soaks, and clouds sag stormy’;
I trudged home, wet, weary and cold:
‘And in his eyes
The cold stars lighting, very old and bleak,
In different skies.’

The next day, we went over to the other side of the river,
Into the ever changing sky-scape of the Dean,
To look at the Dymock Poets’ exhibition in the church
(Where we had tea and cake, whilst the choir rehearsed
For their Great War evening concert: ‘Before Action’),
And Kempley’s war memorial beneath a medieval wall painting,
Before visiting the house of Lascelles Abercombie,
The homes of Robert Frost and Edward Thomas,
With the Malverns, May Hill and the Cotswolds,
All around us in a big sky silver grey cyclorama,
Thinking of Thomas’ poem, ‘For These’,
Written after passing doctor’s orders and enlisting,
On the day my mum was born, 14.7.15,
And some of Thomas’ reasons for joining up:
‘A house that shall love me as I love it,
Well hedged and honoured by a few ash trees…
A garden I need never go beyond…
A spring, a brook’s bend or at least a pond.’

With these words still fresh in my mind,
I got up early the next day, before the cars woke up,
To take a Cider with Rosie ride to Sunday Slad,
Wild garlic was blooming by the side of a spring,
Before I reached the memorial below Bull’s Cross,
I bicycled on past Longridge and Windyridge,
Up hill and down dale to Sheepscombe’s crossroads,
While a parliament of rooks reassured us that winter had indeed ended,
As I passed Damsells Cross and Washwell Farm,
Before descending to Painswick’s yew tree churchyard,
Just as a hailstorm came in from No Man’s Land.

A train to Gloucester, and a bus to Quedgeley,
Took me to St. James’ and its memorial,
Then the next day I explored All Saints Church,
As the wind blew me east, walking through Stroud,
To find a memorial inside the church in Uplands,
A single candle and a wreath sufficient for solemnity;
The number 46 bus and a walk through Shortwood,
Tickmorend and Downend took me to Horsley,
(A memorial just by the church, the bus stop and the school),
Before descending through Ruskin Mill’s sluice-scape,
A heron pointing my way back to Nailsworth and the bus,
Just before the rain came in, on a mid-day westerly breeze.

Next, we were out for a walk on Mothering Sunday,
Through violets, forget me nots, nesting rooks,
And an awakening slowworm in Toadsmoor,
To see Bisley’s crossroads memorial,
Lunchtime drinkers at the Stirrup Cup,
Enjoying the sunshine,
Almost in reading range of the names of the fallen,
Watching me, watching them:
‘I’ve seen ‘em, I’ve seen ‘em, hangin’ on the old barbed wire,
I’ve seen ‘em, I’ve seen ‘em, hangin’ on the old barbed wire.’

A few days later, I caught the bus up to high hill Eastcombe,
Crawling up past old mills, races and ponds again,
With blackthorn and horse chestnut candles
To light my way to the churchyard memorial;
‘I’ve seen ‘em, I’ve seen ‘em, hangin’ on the old barbed wire,
I’ve seen ‘em, I’ve seen ‘em, hangin’ on the old barbed wire.’

My next trip meant the number 35 bus on the 9th of April,
A two pound forty single delight,
Gazing at the wood anemone by the roadside,
A palimpsest of ancient woodland by this main road,
Traveling by bus on what was once a prehistoric track,
That once made its way under a gloomy canopy,
But now tarmacadam speeds south of the Cotswold scarp –
But I was on my way to Nympsfield’s war memorial,
Just by the shadowed wall of the Old Chapel,
A crucifix, refashioned from one found on the Somme,
And brought back to this Catholic village in 1917;
I walked to Nailsworth along Tinkley Lane,
Past the rhythmic turbine, friend and ally of the wind,
Not worried about poison gas beneath the cotton wool clouds.

I had a blood test the following morning,
And doing my best to be a brave soldier by not fainting,
(What would those names on these memorials have thought of me?)
I eventually caught the 230 to Randwick,
£1.50 to be transported along Foxmoor Lane,
Up through Westrip to the crossroad war memorial,
A tree blossom green meadow Cotswold panorama,
And then down to Cainscross along mossy footpaths,
To collect my bike from the timeless Cainscross bike shop,
To cycle along the canal like an Edwardian Mr. Polly,
All under a blue sky Rupert Brooke English heaven.

On the Friday, I caught the number 54,
Three quid one way to Sapperton,
To view the memorial at the parish church of Saint Kenelm,
A memorial for both Sapperton and Frampton Mansell
(Where my dad lived at the end of the Great War);
I dropped down to the Thames and Severn canal tunnel,
To see the River Frome reappear after its dry hiding,
Turbid at first, but quickly limpid and laughing,
A perfect companion for me, and the heron
That acted as a numinous guide through the valley,
Past marsh marigold mouldering locks,
Then anemone and bluebell woodland,
Until I ascended to the Oakridge water trough memorial
(‘Proud of the war all glorious went the son.
Loathing the war all mournful went the mother.
Each had the same wage when the day was done.
Tell me was either braver than the other.’).

My path then went across fields and past springs,
To reach St. John the Baptist in France Lynch,
With its memorial inside the church,
And a gravestone for Private Gardiner,
Died 25th October 1918, aged 18:
It is impossible not to have your heartstrings pulled,
When reading these bald statements in an English churchyard,
On an English spring day, under an English heaven,
So young, and so close to the end,
The remorseless pity of war…
I descended by weavers’ and packhorse tracks,
To reach Chalford and the canal again,
With the Great Western Railway above me,
The ghosts of Tommy Atkins at the carriage windows,
With clouds waving their handkerchief goodbyes.

The next day was chilly with light the colour of pewter,
But a meeting in Stroud Library led me to the memorial
In Bedford Street Congregational Chapel,
A bit of old Stroud right there in the centre of town:
A good cup of good strong tea for only 80p,
An old sweet jar for old postage stamps
‘For the Leprosy Appeal’,
Marmalade for only £1.50,
And a tour of the chapel to see the wall memorial:
‘We used to have congregations of 200, but it’s only 25 now,
And I’m the youngest’;
It was too dark to photograph today,
So we leave that for a bright window light occasion,
As we will Ruscombe Congregational Chapel,
Having been given a contact telephone number
By the welcoming hosts in the tearoom;

So, on a sunny Palm Sunday,
I watched a tractor ploughing a large brown earth field,
With gulls gathering in its wake,
Edward Thomas again flitting through my mind:
‘“Have many gone
From here?” “Yes.” “Many lost?” “Yes; a good few.
Only two teams work on the farm this year.
One of my mates is dead. The second day
In France they killed him…”
I watched the clods tumble and topple over
After the ploughshare and the stumbling team.’

I saw another giant ploughed-earth field the next day,
Clouds tumbling and toppling over,
After taking the 93 to Edge on a day rider:
There is, seemingly, I thought,
No memorial to see in the village,
(The church door was locked)
But it is not a blessed village,
For there is a family tribute to Major Garnegy in the churchyard,
‘He gallantly fell in action on the 3rd July 1916 in his 41st year.’
“There is but one task for all,
And each one life to give,
Who stands if freedom fall
Who dies if England live”.
“He being dead yet speaketh.”

I tripped down the lane to Painswick,
Past bluebells, violets and lady’s smock,
To snap what must be a unique juxtaposition,
A stained glass window
‘dedicated to the glory of God & in honour of the men of Painswick
who served their king and country in the Great War’,
The gift of George Cox AD1925,
Just opposite some Puritan graffiti from 1644,
Etched by Richard Foot, enemy of his king,
A prisoner of the Royalists during the siege of the church,
A line derived from Edmund Spenser’s ‘Faery Queen’,
That could serve as wise counsel for a soldier in any war:
‘Be bolde, Be bolde…be not too bold.’
I looked at the preparations for Easter:
The iconography of the crucifix, sacrifice and resurrection,
And reflected on the iconography of so many war memorials,
So interlinked with Christian symbolism in so many conscious and subliminal ways,
What succour this must have been for so many a century or so ago,
In a land of Christian belief and at a time both spiritual and spiritualist,
When table tapping, séances and mediums,
Electricity and the ether might all lead to the other side.

A visit to Pitchcombe on the number 46 confirmed this.
The village stretches in a semi-circle along a suntrap valley,
But with an old orchard in full bloom for company,
I couldn’t see the church, until helpful instruction:
‘Turn left after the mill pond.’
The memorial stood in bright sunlight
Just behind a thorn entwined crucifix
(Like so much barbed wire),
Down in the shadow, just by the church gate.
I paid my respects and then walked back down the lane,
To chat with a builder, who talked of newcomers,
And how they don’t know what these cottages used to be like,
No piped water, outside privies, no electricity, even in the 60s.
I said I had to get the bus back to Stroud,
He said I should have walked straight down the main road,
It would have been a darn sight quicker,
I said I would have missed his chat then.
I asked him if he thought there might be a memorial inside the church at Edge,
‘It’s a funny thing. I used to think there was something down on the village green.
But there’s nothing there now.
I was born in Edge.
There’s a memorial to my Uncle Jack in the church.
He went down with the Eagle in 1941. Torpedoed.’
We bade farewell as I took the road less taken,
And so to the bus stop.
A car stopped – ‘I’m going to Stroud if you want a lift.’
An elderly gentleman opened the door –
‘Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
I took the one less travelled,
And that has made all the difference.’

The Church of the Holy Trinity in Stroud made a difference too,
Here there is a mural on one wall:
‘He holdeth our souls in life’,
‘To the glory of God and in memory of the men of the Thrupp
who gave their lives serving the king in the years of our Lord 1914-1919’,
‘Greater love hath no man than this that a man lays down his life for his friend’.
These words lie above and below a fetching and surprising picture –
A curly, golden haired David, sling by his side,
Readying himself for Goliath and the Philistine army in the background –
With the names of the fallen on each side of this allegorical representation.
Opposite this mural is a marble tablet,
‘To the glory of God and in honoured memory’,
Beneath which is a long list of names of the men
‘Of this parish who gave their lives by sea and land
in the cause of justice and honour in the Great War 1914-1919
This tablet is erected by their proud and sorrowing fellow parishioners.’

The afternoon was strange and full of fretful foreshadowing:
The Guardian’s main obituary was for a historian of congregational churches,
And a woman at the bus stop travelling to Gloucester Hospital,
With hot cross buns for the nurses,
Told me how wonderful they had been,
But ‘ They couldn’t do anymore for her husband’;
I offered her my sympathies
Before making my way to Ruscombe Congregational Church,
To photograph the Ruscombe Chapel Roll of Honour,
‘For King and Country,
‘Brethren Pray For Us.’
Audrey and her colleagues were giving the church a spring clean,
All ready for Easter;
‘Sometimes we’ve had congregations of five,’ she said,
But Audrey was so jolly as I used my I-pad:
‘I was a typist for 33 years but never touched a computer’;
She’d also been a taxi driver and offered to drive me back to Stroud,
But I wanted to explore the old weavers’ tracks,
So I took her photograph as a memento to send to an emigrant friend,
Said my thanks and descended back to Stroud,
Feeling humbled by the way complete strangers
Have welcomed me into their lives,
Whilst on this pilgrimage of Stroud Valley Tales.

This continued on a chilly Easter Saturday:
Ann Simmons was waiting for me at St John the Baptist at Edge,
Ready to dress the church with flowers,
She showed me the memorial and the roll of honour:
‘In Grateful Memory of the Men of Edge and Stockend
Who Gave Their Lives for their Country in the Great War 1914-1919
This Tablet Erected by their Relations and Friends’,
“They loved not their lives unto the death’,
Ann took my picture for the parish magazine,
Then drove me to Painswick,
So that I could catch the bus back to Stroud,
To catch a glance of cowslips lightening the greenery of April.

I went back to Bedford Street Congregational Church
A damp week later, lilac now in bloom, trees in full leaf,
For another jar of their excellent marmalade,
Only £1.50,
And to photograph the memorial in the vastness of the church:
“In Sacred Memory of the Men who gave their Lives in the Great War 1914-1919’,
Names are listed within a cross, centrepiece; rosettes in the corners;
Then, right and left, on folding panel doors:
‘The Following Also Served’,
With two long lists of names beneath the rubric,
One of the names of the fallen stood out in the gloom,
That of HS Park (killed in France, October 1917);
It was Herbert’s father, Sidney, who gave
Park Gardens, on the Slad Road, 10 years later,
In October 1927,
‘To the Town of Stroud for Use as Pleasure Gardens’;
It felt necessary to make my way home via that spot,
And say a silent thank you.

I thought my pilgrimage was close to its end,
But the next day in Mills Café:
‘Have you seen the screen in St. Albans? We saved it.”
‘There’ll always be another one,’ I said.
‘There’ll always be another one,’ she said.
So the delightfully named Reverend Simon Topping met me at St. Albans,
A 1916 Anglican church, now shared with a Methodist congregation,
And told me of the Arts and Crafts influences on the building,
Before showing me the Rood screen,
With small brass commemorations behind:
‘To The Glory Of God
and in memory of
Eccles James Carter Lieut.RN
Who went down in HMS Pathfinder
September 5th 1914
These Chancel Gates were given by Lieut. John Francis Williams
His friend who himself went down
In HMS Russell April 27th 1916’;
Then on the left hand pillar:
‘To The Glory Of God
and in memory of
Eccles James Carter Lieut. RN
Who went down in HMS Pathfinder
September 5th 1914
This Screen Was Erected By His Mother.’
The odyssey was over, it seemed,
But then Simon looked at me and asked,
‘Have you been to Cashes Green Chapel yet?’

Two days later, we continued a walk tracking the River Frome,
I photographed a war grave in Edgeworth churchyard:
‘16309 Private SA Stephens, Gloucestershire Regiment,
19th May 1916 aged 28’
And then on May Day when nattering on the way to Bulls Cross,
Becky Thomas mentioned that her family came from Edgeworth,
And that her great-uncle Stephens
‘Is in the churchyard, he was killed in the First World War.’
This was a coincidence worthy of a Thomas Hardy,
But Beck’s tales grew even more interesting:
‘The other side of my family came from Woodchester.
You know the Woodchester memorial up by the Ram.
Both my grand-father and great-uncle lied about their ages.
They were sixteen and seventeen.
After my great-uncle was killed, my great-grandmother wrote to the War Office:
“I’ve lost one of my under-age sons. I want the other one back.”
Her son never forgave her, even thirty years later,
When in the home guard on Selsley Common.’
A few days later, I had to visit Slad again,
On a Cider with Rosie Great War mission,
The sun went behind the clouds
As I scribbled down the names from the memorial,
Before biking down to the parish church,
Past the artists outside Holy Trinity,
To photograph the colourful but doleful and ornate
Roll of Honour:


Private Edward Hogg 1st Glosters Died of Wounds May 1914
Private Harry Hogg South Wales Borderers Drowned April 16th 1915
Private Albert Geo. Wm. Brown 8th Glosters Killed in action July 5thth 1916
Private Frederick Jesse Fern 6th Glosters Killed in action Sept 4th 1915
Private Lionel Douglas Jack Brown 2nd Worcesters Killed in action Nov 5th 1916
2nd Lieut D. Douglas Leicester 12th Bn. Gloucester Reg. Killed in action May 8th 1917


May they rest in Peace & awake to a Joyful Resurrection
So, only Cashes Green Church remained,
I biked there after work, Simon Topping opened the door,
I photographed the three brass memorial tablets,
Of the roll of honour,
All lovingly polished and shining brilliantly,
In this red brick roadside 1901 chapel in Etheldene Road,
So cherished and nurtured and new,
When those deaths so soon occurred.
I talked with Simon of all the friends made on this pilgrimage,
Of how I would be speaking in Edge Church at their November 9th service,
Of how welcoming and interested so many people have been, are,
And will be – we wondered if this really would be the last one,
But for the moment, I bicycled home along the canal,
May 19th, the sun hot and high in the sky,
The ground hard -earthed, cracked and dry,
Voices gently singing with the wind,
‘We’re here because we’re here because we’re here because we’re here,
We’re here because we’re here because we’re here because we’re here.’
I now conclude (until the next undiscovered one)
By finishing the lines from Edward Thomas,
Lines from As the team’s head-brass,
From a month ago, on the way to Edge:
‘”… ‘It was back in March,
The very night of the blizzard, too. Now if
He had stayed here we should have moved the tree.’
‘And I should not have sat here. Everything
Would have been different. For it would have been
Another world.’ ‘Ay, and a better, though
If we could see all all might seem good,’ Then
The lovers came out of the wood again:
The horses started and for the last time
I watched the clods crumble and topple over
After the ploughshare and the stumbling team.”

‘In Parenthesis’ by David Jones (1937)

In Parenthesis by David Jones (1937)
A sentence or two from T.S. Eliot is perhaps the best way to describe this book of over 200 pages:
‘A work of literary art…about the experiences of one soldier in the War of 1914-18. It is also a book about War, and many other things also, such as Roman Britain, the Arthurian Legend, and divers matters which are given association by the mind of the writer…it will no doubt undergo the same sort of detective analysis and exegesis as the later work of James Joyce and the Cantos of Ezra Pound.’
Now here are a few extracts that might well persuade you to buy or borrow this unique eye witness account:
‘Reveille at 4.30 with its sleepy stretching and heavy irksome return of consciousness – the lettings in of the beginnings of morning, an icy filtering through, with the drawing back of bolts; creeping into frowzy dank recesses… The gulped down tea, the distribution of eked-out bacon, the wiping dry of mess tins with straw…’
‘You bunched together before a tarred door. Chalk scrawls on its planking – initials, numbers, monograms, signs, hasty, half-erased, of many regiments. Scratched out dates measuring the distance back to antique beginnings.’
‘Proceed without lights… Cloud shielded her bright disc-rising yet her veiled influence illumined the texture of that place, her glistening on the saturated fields; bat-night-gloom intersilvered where she shone on the mist drift…’
‘Intermittent gun flashing had ceased; nothing at all was visible; it still rained in a settled fashion, acutely aslant, drenching the body; they passed other bodies, flapping, clinking, sodden…’
‘Modulated interlude, violently discorded  – mighty, fanned-up glare, to breach it: light orange flame-tongues in the long jagged water mirrors where their feet go…’
‘Rotary steel hail spit and lashed in sharp spasms along the vibrating line; great solemn guns leisurely manipulated their expensive discharges, bringing weight and full recession to the rising orchestration.’
‘Saturate, littered, rusted coilings, metallic rustlings…by rat, or wind, disturbed. Smooth – rippled discs gleamed, where gaping craters, their brimming waters, made mirror for the sky-procession – bear up before the moon incongruous souvenirs. Margarine tins sail derelict, where little eddies quivered…’
‘The road, broken though it was, seemed a firm causeway cutting determinedly the insecurity that lapped its path, sometimes the flanking chaos overflowed its madeness, and they floundered in unstable deeps; chill oozing slime over unstable ankle… Three men, sack-buskined to the hips, rose like judgment wraiths out of the ground…’
 ‘You can hear the silence of it:
you can hear the rat of no-man’s-land
rut-out intricacies,
weasel-out his patient workings,
scrut, scrut, sscrut,
harrow-out earthly, trowel his cunning paw;
redeem the time of our uncharity, to sap his own amphibian paradise.
You can hear his carrying-parties rustle our corruption through the night-weeds – context the choicest morsels in his tiny conduits, bead-eyed feast on us…’
‘Even now you couldn’t see his line, but it was much lighter. The wire-tangle hanging, the rank grass-tangle drenched, tousled, and the broken-tin glint showed quite clearly. Left and right in the fire-bays you could see: soft service-caps wet-moulded to their heads moving… Very slowly the dissipating mist reveals saturate green-grey flats, and dark up-jutting things…’
 ‘Others coaxed tiny smouldering fires, balancing precarious mess tins, anxious-watched to boil. Rain clouds gathered and returned with the day’s progression, with the west wind freshening. The south-west wind caught their narrow gullies in enfilade, gusting about every turn of earth-work, lifting dripping ground-sheets, hung to curtain little cubby-holes.’
Black chemist’s smoke thinned out across the narrow neck of sky. The pandemonium swung more closely, with a 5.9 dud immediately outside; cascades of water charged with clods of earth, emptied on them from above. Two shrapnel -bursts high-over, by good fortune fused a little short for such exact alignment, drove hot fumes down to hang in the low place where they waited helplessly, white-faced, and very conscious of their impotence.
Each half-second the fields spout high their yellow waters with a core of flame. For ninety seconds black columns rise – spread acrid nightmare capitals. Corrosive vapours charge their narrow world. Their sack-wall tremors – the trench seemed entirely to list and to not recover after that near one – here it bulges nastily.’
The continuing rain came softly, in even descent, percolating all things through.
A low shelter stood, it’s galvanised inclining roof reflecting the sky’s leaden, resounded to the water-pelter, each corrugation a separate gully, a channel for the flow. The trench- drain, disintegrated, fallen-in before the strong current was built to canalise. Aquatic sackings betrayed where some tiny trickling found new vent-way for the rising inundation.
The trench tramway went straightly, losing its perspective in the rain-mist, off to the left. This trackway led to a juncture, met another single track, where ill-oiled wheels screech on quiet nights…
This was a country where men from their first habitation had not to rest, but to always dyke and drain if they would outwit the water…’
’Corporal Quilter made investigation round about the lean-to. No human being was visible in the trench or on the open track. A man, seemingly native to the place, a little thick man, swathed with sacking, a limp, saturated bandolier thrown over one soldier and with no other accoutrements, gorgeted in woollen Balaclava, groped out from between two tottering corrugated uprights, his great moustaches beaded with condensation underneath his nose. Thickly greaves with mud so that his puttees and sandbag tie-ons were becoming one whole of trickling ochre.’
 ‘The sky overhead looked crisp as eggshell, wide-domed of porcelain, that suddenly would fracture to innumerable stars. The thin mud on fire-steps glistened, sharpened into rime. The up-to-ankle water became intolerably cold. Two men hasten from the communication trench. They deposit grenade-boxes in a recess used for that purpose and quickly go away.’
 ‘They came out to rest after the usual spell. The raid had been quite successful; an identification had been secured of the regiment opposite, and one wounded prisoner, who died on his way down; ’75 Thomas, and another, were missing; Mr. Rhys and the new sergeant were left on his wire; you could see them plainly, hung like rag-merchants’ stock, when the light was favourable; but on the second night after, Mr. Jenkins’s patrol watched his bearers lift them beyond their parapets. Private Watcyn was recommended for a decoration, and given a stripe; the Commanding Officer received a congratulatory message through the usual channels.’
‘So through the short summer night they slept on, and their companions of the Line.
But under the chalk ridge worried gunners wrinkled their brows, plotted exact angles and toiled with decimals, emerged from flimsy shelters strewn of greenery with logarithmic tables.’
‘But they already look at their watches and it is zero minus seven minutes…this drumming of the diaphragm…
Racked out to another turn of the screw
The acceleration heightens…
And the surfeit of fear steadies to dumb incognition, so that when they give the order to move upward to align with ‘A’, hugged already just under the lip of the acclivity inches below where his traversing machine- guns perforate to powder white -…
You have not the capacity for added fear only the limbs are leaden to negotiate the slope and rifles all out o balance, clumsied with long auxiliary steel
and fresh stalks bled
                    runs the Jerry trench.
And cork-screw stapled trip-wire
to snare among the briars
and iron warp with bramble weft
with meadow-sweet and lady’s smock
for a fair camouflage.’
‘Lift gently Dai, for gentleness
befits his gunshot wound in the lower bowel – go easy – ease at the slope – and
mind him – wait for this one and …

The Long Shadow: The Great War and the Twentieth Century by David Reynolds

The Long Shadow: The Great War and the Twentieth Century by David Reynolds

This is a Govian whizz bang of a book and a rattling good read, even if you don’t agree with his two main propositions that:

  1. 1. The UK was not so affected by the Great War as the other major European powers.
  2. 2. The 1960s and the canonization of ‘The War Poets’ et al has resulted in a distorted understanding of that war.

One sentence from the book to epitomize the argument: ‘Yet the British view of the conflict has remained mired in the mud and stalled on the Somme.’

The first two thirds of the book take us on a narrative to exemplify the above propositions, running from the First World War, through the 20s and 30s and so through the Second World War and the early Cold War. It’s more than absorbing, but I became particularly interested when Reynolds moved into a discussion on ‘cultural memory’ and memory theory.

The Long Shadow by David Reynolds Book Cover

He starts by looking at the proposition that individual memory is seldom the product of solitary reflection, but is rather more often socially constructed (through conversation and so on). He then moves on to Assmann’s view that when we look at social remembrance, we should distinguish between the everyday, conversational mode, and ‘cultural remembrance’, which is, as Reynolds describes, ‘conveyed through writings, monuments and cultural artefacts’.
Reynolds starts his next paragraph with this stark question: ‘Why does this memory theory matter?’ Because, he says, the 1960s saw the demise of the Great War generation who could talk about their memories, and the rise of ‘cultural remembrance, not just in print but, more influentially, through the newer media of film and television’. And, of course, this memorialization ‘was not simply an act of ‘memory’, of capturing the past before it was lost for ever’; but ‘an act of social construction shaped by the circumstances, perceptions and politics of the present’.
Reynolds suggests that initial guilt should be ascribed to Alan Clark’s 1961’The Donkeys’; he further suggests that Clark reinvented the phrase ‘lions led by donkeys’, so that ‘thanks to him and despite the efforts of later military historians, the tag…has become the accepted shorthand for the story of the British army in the Great War.’
David Reynolds then looks at the impact of Joan Littlewood’s 1963 production and the 1969 film: ‘To some all this was propaganda masquerading as history…(for others) It was entertainment and nostalgia’. Reynolds says that the film, with its ‘sustained satire of the military elite…far more didactic than the play, preached a clear anti-war message’. He then finishes with the powerful assertion that ‘Above all’, the film left young generations with both an explicit and ‘subliminal’ sense that the conflict involved a narrative of ‘meandering pointlessness, teetering between tragedy and farce.’
He thinks that this absence of explanation and ‘meaningful narrative’ was also hardwired into cultural memory by AJP Taylor’s ‘The First World War: An Illustrated History’, which was published in 1963 and which viewed the conflict as one, long, blundering futility, from causation to termination. The book sold widely and was then followed by ‘The Great War’ on BBC television (1964-5). This 50th anniversary series gained 8 million viewers and although the scriptwriters’ intentions were to show that the war’s terrible ‘cost had a purpose, millions of viewers came away with a sense of futility and waste’.
This zeitgeist was further strengthened, in Reynold’s view, by the 1960s canonization of the War Poets. Anthologies appearing around the 50th anniversary, together with the embedding of the war poets in school syllabuses, all meant, for Reynolds, an undue emphasis upon the horror of the conflict. It became a ‘poets’ war’, even though, Reynolds asserts, the likes of Sassoon and Owen et al were atypical: but, ‘they became for many people the true chroniclers of Great War history’. Larkin’s ‘MCMXIV’ only added to this sense of regret at the death of an innocent generation and to the condemnation of the strategy of attrition in general, and the Somme in particular.
It is apposite to note that historians such as Gary Sheffield, who have argued that he First World War was a necessary war and that the strategy at the Somme was ultimately vindicated by victory, have been typecast as ‘revisionist’ – but even so, it would seem that their contributions have failed to stop the conflict being typecast as a literary rather than military war. Pat Barker’s trilogy and Sebastian Faulks’ ‘Birdsong’ ‘drew on 1990s British patterns of remembrance – the axiomatic futility of the Great War, the cruciform centrality of the Somme and the dominant voice of poets such as Thomas and Owen’.
The revival of Remembrance Day, the death of Harry Patch (the last veteran), the ubiquity of family history research and the laureate poems of Carol Ann Duffy have all helped this new pattern of remembrance continue into the new millennium. Reynolds himself accepts that the fact that as so many of the 2.5 million men who chose to enlist (43% of the total army numbers between 1914 and 1918) died on the Somme, this ‘adds special poignancy ‘ to the unfolding of events.
But, we conclude: firstly, with his assertions about the ‘war poets’ – ‘these men were neither typical of the British Tommy in general nor of …writers… Their verse should not be used as historical description… Most Tommies were not hypersensitively reflective about their own manhood, sexuality or even suffering’; secondly, that even if we might not agree with the book’s main perspective, we can agree that it’s a damned good read; thirdly and absolutely conclusively, it’s time to mention David Jones’ ‘In Parenthesis’.That poetical first hand account of trench life is our next posting.

Newnham and World War One

My mate Bob sent me this feature from the Citzen about Newnham on Severn:

Commemorative plaques are being placed on walls of homes and public buildings to remember those villagers who fought in, died in, or returned from the Great War. This summer will see eight blue plaques for survivors, but forty-one black plaques for those who died.

Blue plaques represent the soldiers who survived the war and returned to Newnham, while black plaques immortalise the 41 men who left the Forest of Dean village to join the war effort and never returned home.
The treasurer of the Newnham History Group, Nigel Haig told the Citizen that: “There has been a huge interest in the village for this project, which we’re really grateful for. They have been really supportive.”
This was too interesting to ignore and as the plaques will be up for the month of August only, I caught the number 23 from Gloucester on August 21st (btw a Stagecoach explorer ticket got me from Stroud to Newnham and back for £6.50) and made my way to the other side of the river.

It felt like an Ivor Gurney and Will Harvey charabanc ride:
Red apple orchards, sleepy old railway lines,
A slow, stippled, brown mud Severn,
Cyclists, church spires, village fetes,
The smell of farms and the tramp of farmers’ boys,
Big sky cumulus clouds and wood clad hillsides –
So much so that I screened out the electricity pylons,
The endless fields of sweet corn and the relentless traffic
(52 casualties in three years on this busy road),
Until I reached the broad thoroughfare of Newnham,
Where I went hunting for blue plaques.

I started at the top of the street and worked my down,
Then back up again to the bus stop by the church:
The plaques are heritage blue and are of paper rather than metal,
They sit unobtrusively on the walls of shops, cottages and houses,
And will remain there until the end of the month, but
The first ones to catch my eye were on the church wall:
(Every single plaque, whether blue or black, has the same title:
‘The Great War 1914-1918 The men who went to war’,
And then underneath those two lines is the citation)
Three black and three blue on the left hand side of the church gate,
Two black and three blue on the right hand side, two more black,
Then another blue at the lych-gate, then blues down the High Street,
Until two more black at Bailey’s Stores, on the corner of Station Road,
With four blues underneath; then more blues up the High Street,
Until another black (with four blues) at Camerons, Dean Road corner,
Then another black plaque and three more blue plaques,
Before I reached the bus stop opposite the church…

This tells only a part of Newnham’s statistical story,
But this wall marking forcefully shows the density
And extensity of the men who marched away from Newnham,
Whilst the citations tell a vivid tale of a world that has gone,
I choose just four before ‘each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds’:
‘James Ferris Enlisted 1914-aged 25 Private, 8th Battalion, Gloucestershire Regiment, Son of James Ferris,
Harbour Master at Bullo Pill Docks’;
‘Stephen Brobyn, Corporal Shoeing-Smith, 46th Brigade,
Royal Field Artillery, Killed in action December 1918,
Son of Robert Brobyn of Church Road’;
‘Edward Archibald Crofton McLaughlin
2nd Lieutenant, 7th Seaforth Highlanders
Killed in action November 1915 aged 20
Son of Vivian McLaughlin,
Headmaster of Brightlands, Church Road’;
‘Herbert Guy Bromlow McLaughlin
2nd Lieutenant, 3rd Seaforth Highlanders
Killed in action October 1916 aged 18
Son of Vivian McLaughlin,
Headmaster of Brightlands, Church Road’;
I looked across at the dilapidated Victoria Hotel,
I could see them all there, having a last pint,
Before walking down the High Street, then along Station Road,
Where so many roads led to France, the loss of innocence
And the loss of the world of Edward Thomas:

‘“Have many gone
From here?” “Yes.” “Many lost?” “Yes; a good few.
Only two teams work on the farm this year.
One of my mates is dead. The second day
In France they killed him…”
“… ‘It was back in March,
The very night of the blizzard, too. Now if
He had stayed here we should have moved the tree.’
‘And I should not have sat here. Everything
Would have been different. For it would have been
Another world.’ ‘Ay, and a better, though
If we could see all all might seem good,’ Then
The lovers came out of the wood again:
The horses started and for the last time
I watched the clods crumble and topple over
After the ploughshare and the stumbling team.”